My parents wanted me to be a perfect child
But I always chose to sit on the farthest aisle
Tried sneaking around to see what was there
Lights blinked from everywhere
Some being strong and some being faint
But for that I had to be there to make
Always I had to make back in time
In order to look like the perfect child
Now it feels I have gone so far
Returning back will be a war
I know I can do it in time
But I again see some doors in line
And I want to see what’s inside
The risk is too big to take
But I really still want to play
The dilemma is when to stop
And return back to the steady halt
But the journey still seems so long
Expectations grow all along
I wish for the day
When I will stand
And mom will say
You have been the perfect one
The chances seem dimmest scarce
But I know I have to win this race
14 comments:
[:)]...nice...welcome to the blogging world.....
"sometimes you’re ahead, sometimes
you’re behind…the race is long, and in the end, it’s only with
yourself" -Sunscreen Song
hud hud.. nice opening
Thanks guys for your comments
@ Sandeep
appreciate your valuable words of wisdom, they have been noted.
"race never ends if you keep score
the opponent is your inner core
break at checkpoints on regular times
to keep the devil locked inside"
Nice start Surdy...i think u've nailed this one...Quite touching...Cheers!
surdy sab theek to hai na ? ye blog wlog ki bimari tujhe bhi lag gayi kya ? waise accha likha hai jo bhi likha hai ..... aur suna kya chal raha hai ..
@ panacea
Thanks bud ... by the way I m not able to make out who you are?
@ akash
haan yaar sub theek hai .... yahan kuch logon se inspiration mill gayi aur vella time toh max hai .... tu sunah kuch nayi tazi
Is that you? My brother at poetry! and that too an awesome one! Really Nice Work [:D]
P.s. :- Welcome to blogging
really nice :) what a way to start blogging..
surdy, i neva saw this side of urs...its really nice...firstly i saw a lotta changed surdy in bangalore and now more different....good work man....but y does it happen it all comes out....and thts the dilemma for me....
@gopal
Thanks bud .. should be beginners luck wait for the next one ... i m sure will be horrible
@truly
Thanks man ... actually I got some inspiration from some of my friends in SLB ... but felt good to finally write something .... and i m thinking of writing another one.
Nice one. I never knew ur inside :)
sahi surdy ... in my messed up head surdy and poetry don't quite gel ... but thats just me ... i'll come around ... keep em coming mate :)
@ balli .... thanks man
@ keeda .... took a shot at this blog thing, have to say is kinda cool, you get to write all kinda crap. Anyways thanks keede for your inputs
@ the confused lot..
vrythng happns for a reason.
i wish my dear friend has finally found the right stuff in his life..
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